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Talim and Amy Dollies Talim and Amy Dollies

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

good

The only complaint I could ever have about this artwork is that the brunettes left knee looks oddly farther down the leg then her right without much to support her leg being farther back then her right.

other then that well... I guess a background, maybe a toy box or something. but awesome job.

keep up the good work. *gives cookie*


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Moment of Lust - Chamber Moment of Lust - Chamber

Rated 4 / 5 stars

hmmmm

Only a few things to say really.

The window might have looked better if there was scenary in it (as in maybe a plain or a forest or burning townsfolk, anything really the white just looks weird)

the art doesn't seem smooth... its a good job but the female character (mostly) seems drawn strangely. perhaps you should go over her one more time with the pen.

and I think I speak for everyone when I say captain censor-man needs to die. I mean seriously, if your aware your looking at adult material, you know the repercussions of clicking that one vore/gore porn image.

its their own fault really.

other then whats stated above you did a good job. better then 90% of all nude/porn pictures out there.


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Fatchaos responds:

Thanks!
I absolutely agree with the window... it is rather... cheap, I guess I was in a hurry to finally finish this picture... burning townsfolk? XD

And yes, I'm aware my anatomy is yet to reach the "perfect" level... I just need to practice more & more!

Captain censorship I didn't hire because I wanted... last time I left him out, my pieces got deleted as... "inappropriate". So I am not sure when to leave him out again.

And thanks again!


Pin Up Inverno Pin Up Inverno

Rated 4 / 5 stars

hmmm

The art is far above par. all the shading is done right the hair is beautiful and the horns/wings are a nice touch.

her legs do seem a bit bulky but not unnaturally bulky. she appears to have the "Thunder-Thigh" look whether or not you were going for that idk.

Her torso (around tummy and below breasts) appears to have been shaped a bit strangely. In my personal unprofessional opinion it looks like the curve from her back to her butt was to defined (making her lower half look fat and her upper half look thin)

I guess you could say its a little lop-sided to me if you tilted the perspective so you were looking up at her it would be normal but currently the bottom half is to large for my tastes.

oh and awesome job.


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Kagami-Hirosai responds:

Thank you so much for the input! I actually pointed out these flaws to myself and a few more that I see.
I do appreicate the fact that you took the time to write a lengthy review, and you were very polite about it.

And you complimented me so I hafta kinda love you.

<3