Coulda been long but it was a really great game.

oh and btw

Money Maker - After getting the first ruby reopen the safe continuously until you have 10 rubies

It is the same as post nuke explorer, it only has different pictures.

a.k.a. its probably what p.n.e. should have been (mutant chicks are weird)

its a decent try but the combat is sketchy at best, in order to fix it you should revise the hit/miss system with a dice roll (1 to 100) where the randomly selected number is your % to hit, then influence that number by the combat and strength skills (just add them on).

the equation is something like this (not remade for AS use)
random (1-100) + combatskill + strength = % to hit (for hand-to-hand)
random (1-100) + Magicskill + Intelligence = % to hit (for magic attacks)

Doing that should give you a more accurate hit/miss system.

if you already have a system like that, add a +10 to the end of the equation to increase the accuracy of any given attack.

hope this helps

this deserves a long review "and" a special story line.

quick overview
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intro 0:00 / 0:52 - waking up in factory, brought to life.

early 0:53 / 2:31 - everyday life, emotionless cubical work, falling in line like a machine.

middle 2:32 / 4:17 - vocals (someone speaking on a bread-box or perhaps a worried friend talking to you)

end 4:18 / end - Stayed home from work, phone ringing off the hook, sitting on bed head in hands thoughtful and sad at same time.

for hole story see below
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start/0:52 - Your on your back on a conveyor belt rolling through a dark factory, all you can see is black and white, machines piecing you together bit by bit as your carried along. Your not the only one in this factory.

0:53/1:41 - you awake in bed as if it was a dream, you get dressed, looking in the mirror you see your body is robotic and metallic.

1:42/2:22 - You head out your front door, you look around and see everything is mechanized to some extent or another and everyone is gray. You walk through the city to your work.

2:23/2:30 - you see an electric jack hanging in front of your work station, and you plug it into the back of your neck as you always have.

2:30/ 2:45 - Reality seems to simply fall away. Then you hear the voice of a stranger.

2:46/4:17 - you work while listening to the voice as if in a trance, you never payed it any mind really as it was always the same voice you've always heard, but this time it sounds different, after a while you lose your trance like state and listen, your vision turns blue, then green, then all the colors start to fall into place one at a time bringing color to your vision.

4:18/end - the metallic components of your body break off and fall to the floor. People are shocked as you run out of work shoving them out of the way, you run outside, the sky is gray with lightning and the buildings are metallic silver. The people stare at you with their soulless gaze. They to are all still gray and robotic. You run through the city shoving people out of your way as you escape, the electric jack is still stuck in the back of your neck, but no cable is attached to it.

Sorry I've got nothing for this one.

it may just be that I'm wrapped up in my own problems or it may just be that this song has rendered me speechless.

both are pretty valid opinions. either way the song is great. I did attempt to make a remix but I couldn't do it, I do not posses enough skill to grace your works.

I may try again when I'm more awake.

good job.

Reminds me of an old story. of a wicked bussinessman who kills loved ones for fun. and leaves cards for them to try and hunt him down.

but from the viewpoint of the victim.

anyways this is a really good track and if I do say so you did a really good job.
here's to more great music like this :D