Score: 10

"hmmm"

submission: Finding That Something Special

date: July 15, 2009

this deserves a long review "and" a special story line.

quick overview
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intro 0:00 / 0:52 - waking up in factory, brought to life.

early 0:53 / 2:31 - everyday life, emotionless cubical work, falling in line like a machine.

middle 2:32 / 4:17 - vocals (someone speaking on a bread-box or perhaps a worried friend talking to you)

end 4:18 / end - Stayed home from work, phone ringing off the hook, sitting on bed head in hands thoughtful and sad at same time.

for hole story see below
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start/0:52 - Your on your back on a conveyor belt rolling through a dark factory, all you can see is black and white, machines piecing you together bit by bit as your carried along. Your not the only one in this factory.

0:53/1:41 - you awake in bed as if it was a dream, you get dressed, looking in the mirror you see your body is robotic and metallic.

1:42/2:22 - You head out your front door, you look around and see everything is mechanized to some extent or another and everyone is gray. You walk through the city to your work.

2:23/2:30 - you see an electric jack hanging in front of your work station, and you plug it into the back of your neck as you always have.

2:30/ 2:45 - Reality seems to simply fall away. Then you hear the voice of a stranger.

2:46/4:17 - you work while listening to the voice as if in a trance, you never payed it any mind really as it was always the same voice you've always heard, but this time it sounds different, after a while you lose your trance like state and listen, your vision turns blue, then green, then all the colors start to fall into place one at a time bringing color to your vision.

4:18/end - the metallic components of your body break off and fall to the floor. People are shocked as you run out of work shoving them out of the way, you run outside, the sky is gray with lightning and the buildings are metallic silver. The people stare at you with their soulless gaze. They to are all still gray and robotic. You run through the city shoving people out of your way as you escape, the electric jack is still stuck in the back of your neck, but no cable is attached to it.

Score: 10

"Nothin"

submission: Reasoner- 2,327 Miles

date: May 31, 2009

Sorry I've got nothing for this one.

it may just be that I'm wrapped up in my own problems or it may just be that this song has rendered me speechless.

both are pretty valid opinions. either way the song is great. I did attempt to make a remix but I couldn't do it, I do not posses enough skill to grace your works.

I may try again when I'm more awake.

good job.

Score: 10

"awesome"

submission: -Silence Before the Hurricane-

date: April 15, 2009

Reminds me of an old story. of a wicked bussinessman who kills loved ones for fun. and leaves cards for them to try and hunt him down.

but from the viewpoint of the victim.

anyways this is a really good track and if I do say so you did a really good job.
here's to more great music like this :D

Score: 10

"Nice"

submission: Reasoner- Dear World

date: April 15, 2009

Yes heartbreak is never the same for everyone.

But I believe that we can all relate to one thing concerning heartbreak. And thats the reflecting on it.

when A person reaches a state of wonder, confusion, or misery they begin to question how they became who they are and why they are in whatever situation they may be in.

apon these most important and life changing questions love appears. But as we all know, love is always accompanied by pain. And that is just a simple fact we've all come to believe.

Everyone has experianced heartbreak once and it does majorly effect who you are and will be as a person through the menial things that happen in a heartbreak.

Such as... how you broke up, what you did to recover, who was there for you, and the circumstances of the breakup (cheating, no love, hate, fight, etc.)

people experiance breakups in very unique ways, but the first one is always the hardest and has the most long term effects. Some people will seek drugs to cover the pain or to forget, some hide away from the world and bottle it up inside letting it build untill it overflows, others seek a shoulder to cry on, and some may seek revenge for the heart break... and attempt to break their heart as well in an attempt to cover the pain.

If I had not experianced heartbreak at such a young age or in such a way I may have been influenced to do drugs, drink, or even do crime, and I probly would have if not for the heart break. I bottled it up for several years and things got progressivly worse, eventually I turned emo attempted suicide a few times, and finally came to terms with it when I met my current gf.

So you see it has very long effects and the first will always outlive the last and we can all say one thing about it.

Heartbreak did effect who we are today. Those of you who have not experianced it are for now lucky and unlucky. Just remember not to lose your head over it. No amount of drugs, video games, crying, or physical abuse will change it or make it easier. Just give it time.

Sorry about that LONG review reasoner, yk how I get during late nights :)

once again, perfect song, and as you can see from the very long review above you hit your marks perfectly yet again.

Thanks for the beautiful music, Keep doing your thing

Score: 10

"yeah"

submission: Gradius III- Taming The Viper

date: April 15, 2009

I remember that game it was really fun. but it was Soooooooooooooo hard near the end.

I wanted to bash my TV at the end of the game.

great tribute, and as a bonus it could be used as background music for a game :D

Score: 6

"ok..."

submission: Verizon Wireless: Meat & Dulcy

date: March 26, 2009

It was funny... it was lude... but I don't really think it was top 5 material... seeing what #2 was... it just doesn't seem right...

Well the populace apparently likes it whether or not I do so.

Good job on getting #1 on top 5.

Score: 10

"Cool"

submission: Zombie Gaze

date: March 26, 2009

This is really awesome, perfect zombie shooting background music (if robot count was removed.

this is also technically heavy-metal cause of the hard-core guitar.

great job, You really know what your doing when it comes to music, and the title was perfect for it to.

Score: 10

"*yawn*"

submission: Lullaby (song 11)

date: March 13, 2009

Holds true to the title *head sways from side to side* oh man making me sleepy...

Sounds really good. Can't wait to get to bed now... good dreams...

Thanks, Hope you make more great music...

oh...

Music doesn't require energy and fast rythm's to be enjoyable... As long as the sounds you hear are pleasurable to your ears anything can be music...

There's my 2 cents... Night (3:00am btw...)

Score: 8

"???"

submission: FF7 - J-E-N-O-V-A

date: March 9, 2009

Why did you tag it with F777? that was really confusing.

idk whether to think this is one of his works you've remastered or your own...

well w/e

to your credit it does sound great but took a point off cause of confusion.

Score: 10

"true"

submission: Love will be shown.

date: March 9, 2009

Beautiful song, It has a hip-hoppish sound to it but it also has a sort of "Classical" romantic sound as well thanks to the piano and the violin (?)

I'm glad I listened to this. It made my day better.

5/5 10/10

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So few people understand the importance of love anymore its shameful.

People can say love is important but what do they do about it. Nothing.

The fact is that the simple virtue of "Real" love is dieing. It has been for the past 300 years.

But at least when it goes I'll still be holding onto it.

Love = Life